This is King Goldy our new class pet. He loves to eat fish flakes you know the ones that smell like dog food. As you can see he is a boy. his favourite game is fishy express. I rescued him from nearly getting eaten. He will give you support even thought he can’t talk. He is as nice as your mum hugging you. Splash splosh his tail shakes like a dog wagging his tail in the water. By Jarian.
What an awesome story Jarian ������
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A great piece of writing Jarian. I like the way you used similes to describe what King Goldy does. Great work :)
ReplyDeleteSuch an amazing story.❤️
ReplyDeletethere are also a crafish named frank the tank
ReplyDeleteI think you are a great writer to our class Jarian
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ReplyDeleteJarian that was a great story and I love how you said king goldy.
ReplyDeleteNice story Jarian. I like how you told what he likes doing. You are a great writer in our class. from Freya Temple!
ReplyDeleteI like how you wrote splash splosh in your writing.from Freya Temple!
ReplyDeleteGreat story Jarian.I love how it was so creative.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading this and instead of writing pony express you wrote fishy.I always new you were a hero
ReplyDeleteWow awesome writing Jarian. You should be an author when you grow up!!
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